Balance

[micah3801]

Balance Not Symmetry. No comma. Not: Balance, Not Symmetry. That would imply a distinction. It gives balance to nonsymmetry. Which?

Well that's the point of the points.

If you are dissatisfied with this meagre critique, I'm open to hear about it.
I like to go step by step with you so as not to make monkeywrench assumptions.

If i understand correctly, you are saying that the comma implies a distinction? That is what im going for overall. The balance possible in nonsymmetry is what i'm trying to explore, such as a relationship of caretaking/care-getting being balanced while not symmetrical, or the amount of feathers on one side of the scale being vastly different from the amount of bricks. Or, like with the water lines, how one very difficult thing makes more of an impact than many easy things. Let me know if i've misinterpreted your comment, though!