06-08-2021, 06:28 AM
I feel that this condition is going to serve you well. It's a "gift"
I didn't put a period on purpose.
I read the poem. And I'm commenting on your declared insecurity.
I'm like that, you see.
The poem has some strong points, added by your condition. I'm going to talk about this.
But, I'm doing something else right now.
My # 1 post is saying: Don't deny the gift, or return it to the store. Sharpen it.
You used rhyme very well, in the one instance I remember, right off the bat.
I work better is discourse. So talk and I'll talk
You can get your rhythm and rhyme to foster your poetic logic.
That also occurred to me.
You aren't far from that.
I didn't put a period on purpose.
I read the poem. And I'm commenting on your declared insecurity.
I'm like that, you see.
The poem has some strong points, added by your condition. I'm going to talk about this.
But, I'm doing something else right now.
My # 1 post is saying: Don't deny the gift, or return it to the store. Sharpen it.
You used rhyme very well, in the one instance I remember, right off the bat.
I work better is discourse. So talk and I'll talk
You can get your rhythm and rhyme to foster your poetic logic.
That also occurred to me.
You aren't far from that.