Nicotine (edit 3)

[Knot]

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Hi TqB,

not keen on the title change (what Tango?) and I don't think the first verse adds anything (hurdy-gurdy death, whatever that is, lacks clean simplicity of the final line and, to me, undermines it).

Anything better than 'stroll the streets'?

maybe 'listening' for 'and listen' (L7) (then 'whistling' for 'that whistles'? (L11))

Change 'pipe' to 'bowl' (L10) to avoid the repetition?

Best of luck quitting, Knot