06-04-2021, 05:34 AM
I really like this poem, both of my mom's 20 year old cats died this year and the second one ran away and disappeared to die. I don't mind the simplicity or repetitions. Coward like a 'scaredy cat'. The repetition of coward makes me relate it to a person nearing their end, to a degree I want more to read but I also appreciate where my mind is able to go without too many details. Maybe if the beginning has 'people say' about cats, you could include what 'people say' about cowards. How do they say it's bad in a commonly understood phrase?
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