06-03-2021, 04:06 AM
Thanks again Tqb for your further input, as you may see I've taken some of your advice in what i doubt will be my finished version. Can't say I'm fully happy with outcome and may well have abandoned my first effort if it wasn't for the ethos of edit and improve that this site encourages. I’ll keep working away at it.
I can humourously describe my first effort as dogshit lol! Haphazardly traipsed over this site's welcome mat!
Although my latest edit better reflects what I am trying to convey its still uncertain if a turd can be polished!
Newbie
I can humourously describe my first effort as dogshit lol! Haphazardly traipsed over this site's welcome mat!
Although my latest edit better reflects what I am trying to convey its still uncertain if a turd can be polished!
Newbie

