06-02-2021, 08:16 PM
Hey owens,
You wrote, "I'm alone and I'm alive and I'm proud."
That statement reminds me just how glad I am to have people in my life in whom I can trust. I'm very well aware of my aloneness, which is why I seek out these other people.
The all caps may as well read "LONELINESS", as that would be more appropriate in this piece: all of the previous adjectives describe that. GLADNESS just doesn't seem as honest as the rest of the poem.
Anywho, you're really only as alone as you want to be.
HEY! I see you. SEE? Now you're not alone.
Peace be with you,
Mark
You wrote, "I'm alone and I'm alive and I'm proud."
That statement reminds me just how glad I am to have people in my life in whom I can trust. I'm very well aware of my aloneness, which is why I seek out these other people.
The all caps may as well read "LONELINESS", as that would be more appropriate in this piece: all of the previous adjectives describe that. GLADNESS just doesn't seem as honest as the rest of the poem.
Anywho, you're really only as alone as you want to be.
HEY! I see you. SEE? Now you're not alone.
Peace be with you,
Mark