Lockdown edit 2 and fro!
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Yes Tranquility, dug is just slang for dog.
The term cunt could also be misconstrued, in this context it is not intended to be offensive it just means person.
I do think this poem will benefit from an edit. I'll post a revised effort when I can.
Thanks again for the feedback.
Newbie
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Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by newbie - 05-30-2021, 01:05 PM
RE: Lockdown - by Mark A Becker - 05-30-2021, 10:03 PM
RE: Lockdown - by newbie - 05-30-2021, 10:54 PM
RE: Lockdown - by TranquillityBase - 05-31-2021, 04:11 AM
RE: Lockdown - by newbie - 05-31-2021, 06:45 PM
RE: Lockdown - by TranquillityBase - 05-31-2021, 08:59 PM
RE: Lockdown - by newbie - 05-31-2021, 09:32 PM
RE: Lockdown (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 06-01-2021, 09:58 PM
RE: Lockdown edit 2 - by newbie - 06-03-2021, 04:06 AM
RE: Lockdown edit 2 - by TranquillityBase - 06-04-2021, 08:09 AM
RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by Quixilated - 06-07-2021, 06:03 AM
RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by CRNDLSM - 06-07-2021, 08:54 AM
RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by Knot - 06-07-2021, 10:16 PM
RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by newbie - 06-08-2021, 06:18 PM



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