Lockdown edit 2 and fro!

Lockdown edit 2 and fro!

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05-31-2021, 06:45 PM

Hi Tranquility base and many thanks for your feedback,
I can see how this poem is hard to follow,
I never spent much time reflecting on it before posting
It was very much written 'in the moment' lol (I'd had a few scoops!)
I think it does serve as a snapshot of lockdown though and I should try and tighten it up
I've been enjoying reading the poetry on here
Think I was a little too keen to post something!
Newbie

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Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by newbie - 05-30-2021, 01:05 PM

RE: Lockdown - by Mark A Becker - 05-30-2021, 10:03 PM

RE: Lockdown - by newbie - 05-30-2021, 10:54 PM

RE: Lockdown - by TranquillityBase - 05-31-2021, 04:11 AM

RE: Lockdown - by newbie - 05-31-2021, 06:45 PM

RE: Lockdown - by TranquillityBase - 05-31-2021, 08:59 PM

RE: Lockdown - by newbie - 05-31-2021, 09:32 PM

RE: Lockdown (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 06-01-2021, 09:58 PM

RE: Lockdown edit 2 - by newbie - 06-03-2021, 04:06 AM

RE: Lockdown edit 2 - by TranquillityBase - 06-04-2021, 08:09 AM

RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by Quixilated - 06-07-2021, 06:03 AM

RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by CRNDLSM - 06-07-2021, 08:54 AM

RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by Knot - 06-07-2021, 10:16 PM

RE: Lockdown edit 2 and fro! - by newbie - 06-08-2021, 06:18 PM

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