05-31-2021, 04:07 AM
Good assessment by notch.
My only real issue lies with S.3, as "terrorist" just seems out of place. It does rhyme with "exist" and "fist", but there are plenty of other "...ist" rhymes you could've gone with. BUT you obviously chose these intentionally. So, it is what it is.
Since you posted this in MISC, Paul, I imagine you can just leave it alone as a thought provoking piece, because it certainly did accomplish that, all nits aside.
Mark
My only real issue lies with S.3, as "terrorist" just seems out of place. It does rhyme with "exist" and "fist", but there are plenty of other "...ist" rhymes you could've gone with. BUT you obviously chose these intentionally. So, it is what it is.
Since you posted this in MISC, Paul, I imagine you can just leave it alone as a thought provoking piece, because it certainly did accomplish that, all nits aside.
Mark