05-24-2021, 07:17 AM
As a sensory poem it does a fine job. Dung and fetid water trough....yup, I can see it all. Smell it.
But the allusion to Noah makes it that much more interesting
Knot’s suggestion to make the last line the title is a great one. It does sound a lot better to end the poem on “exhibit”
But the allusion to Noah makes it that much more interesting
Knot’s suggestion to make the last line the title is a great one. It does sound a lot better to end the poem on “exhibit”