05-23-2021, 09:57 PM
The first four lines leave me cold. I think the poem really starts ginning at l. 5.
When we make a line break with a keyboard, we hit Return, and it's so easy to do, and we are returning to the beginning.
But if we were writing with a pen, it would feel more like a break than a return. More thought has to go into it. At least that's how I imagine line breaks feel.
When we make a line break with a keyboard, we hit Return, and it's so easy to do, and we are returning to the beginning.
But if we were writing with a pen, it would feel more like a break than a return. More thought has to go into it. At least that's how I imagine line breaks feel.