(understanding is)/(as a positive hoax) as two separate titles or (understanding is a positive hoax)/(understanding as a positive hoax). It seemed you said the 'i' as I understood it was a typo that you couldn't control, so did I fix the title by making it as you intended, or did I ruin the title because the frustration of automation deciding for you was already an improved poem?
I think the same line with just the word same is pretty good line in relation to the themes and previous similar lines.
I can't see the last line as prose, since the rest doesn't seem to be prose. Maybe you could just repeat the first line after the last line
Why linebreaks feel
F regulating energy
Repeat the cycle more or less
I think the same line with just the word same is pretty good line in relation to the themes and previous similar lines.
I can't see the last line as prose, since the rest doesn't seem to be prose. Maybe you could just repeat the first line after the last line
Why linebreaks feel
F regulating energy
Repeat the cycle more or less
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