Beans and Toast
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Monitors refer to a computer. I feel like there is a better way to phase that idea.
It being a way too look back at songs recorded, your friends, and the places you've traveled.

Tranquility- I hope that answer your question, The analogy in the 9th stanza refers to when your honoring a good part of you past-self or maybe a memory of someone you remember having good traits, you honor them by living well. I guess you could add themselves in there but I want it to be more open to interpretation.

Also if you like Alien Dishes you should check out my super old poem called Psychideli. Pretty much about Alien Dishes.

Thanks for the input ya'll
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Messages In This Thread
Beans and Toast - by Bunx - 05-20-2021, 05:25 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by dukealien - 05-20-2021, 08:10 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Bunx - 05-20-2021, 09:23 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Tiger the Lion - 05-20-2021, 12:01 PM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Bunx - 05-21-2021, 02:14 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Leaf - 05-21-2021, 02:16 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Bunx - 05-21-2021, 02:50 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by TranquillityBase - 05-22-2021, 12:08 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Leaf - 05-22-2021, 02:27 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Bunx - 05-22-2021, 05:03 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Leaf - 05-23-2021, 01:50 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Bunx - 05-23-2021, 03:59 AM
RE: Beans and Toast - by Leaf - 05-24-2021, 04:18 AM



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