05-21-2021, 02:28 AM
(05-09-2021, 11:15 AM)Erthona Wrote: Ozymandiasit says what it says. it doesn't seem like the kind of piece to dissect any more than emotionally, not if one wants to have any fun -- i take it literally, which feels like a compliment to the poet. the last line feels too obvious, but my opinion on that might change, so for now these neutrally-delivered alternatives:
I laid down in my flower bed
but found nowhere to place my head.
Of course it mattered not,
for I was dead and soon would rot.
for soon I'd rot
for I was soon to rot
and so on.

