05-19-2021, 11:13 AM
(05-19-2021, 03:31 AM)Leaf Wrote: Hi TqB,Yes, I really wanted to respond to Maj, but I know (sometimes) when I'm being trolled. Actually his comment was unintentionally funny in what it revealed about him.
This is great stuff. I like your capitalisation of the E and all the imagery. And I always like a bit of shrieking in a poem.
I was going to explain a few things to Maj, but I see he's been banned. Ah well.
Thank you for the encouraging words. To critique my own poem, "curious ape-like gait" is probably a cliche, but I couldn't think of a better description.

