Everybody's Monkey
#4
(05-19-2021, 03:31 AM)Leaf Wrote:  Hi TqB,

This is great stuff. I like your capitalisation of the E and all the imagery. And I always like a bit of shrieking in a poem.

I was going to explain a few things to Maj, but I see he's been banned. Ah well.
Yes, I really wanted to respond to Maj, but I know (sometimes) when I'm being trolled.  Actually his comment was unintentionally funny in what it revealed about him.  

Thank you for the encouraging words.  To critique my own poem, "curious ape-like gait" is probably a cliche, but I couldn't think of a better description.
Reply


Messages In This Thread
Everybody's Monkey - by TranquillityBase - 05-16-2021, 12:21 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by Majestic Sun - 05-18-2021, 10:38 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by Leaf - 05-19-2021, 03:31 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by TranquillityBase - 05-19-2021, 11:13 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by Leaf - 05-20-2021, 03:18 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by Bunx - 05-21-2021, 02:55 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by TranquillityBase - 05-21-2021, 11:46 PM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by Quixilated - 05-21-2021, 04:35 AM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by busker - 05-30-2021, 02:19 PM
RE: Everybody's Monkey - by Mark A Becker - 05-30-2021, 09:32 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!