05-15-2021, 11:07 AM
"As for the message you are intending to get across, it is a little unclear. Are you warning people about becoming isolated little drones at their laptops or television? If so, maybe you can flesh it out to imply that even stronger."
Thanks for reading and commenting NM. I think I was trying to say that in the future humans will be so intertwined (unhappily so) that they will be like rat kings. That's if I had to explain it. I really had no coherent message in mind, just words, lovely words. End definitely needs work I guess, but right now I like it too much.
Thanks for reading and commenting NM. I think I was trying to say that in the future humans will be so intertwined (unhappily so) that they will be like rat kings. That's if I had to explain it. I really had no coherent message in mind, just words, lovely words. End definitely needs work I guess, but right now I like it too much.