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Rat King (edit)
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05-14-2021, 07:49 PM
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Hi TqB,
no I don't think it would, for me it doesn't connect the thoughts 'clock' and 'looking outward' (possibly it's the word looking?
maybe 'staring' or 'facing'?) - but also, how does 'dedicated' work with either bits or bites?
thirteen contortions of rage ?
I must apologise for disrupting your 13 line format (one line for each rat?) - too slow on the uptake there, unless ...
 Best, Knot
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Rat King (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-12-2021, 02:39 AM
RE: Rat King - by Majestic Sun - 05-12-2021, 08:08 AM
RE: Rat King - by Knot - 05-12-2021, 09:14 PM
RE: Rat King - by Leaf - 05-13-2021, 02:28 AM
RE: Rat King - by TranquillityBase - 05-13-2021, 11:01 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2021, 01:20 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by Leaf - 05-14-2021, 02:17 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2021, 02:27 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by Knot - 05-14-2021, 02:35 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2021, 03:14 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by Knot - 05-14-2021, 07:49 PM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by newmystic - 05-15-2021, 03:14 AM
RE: Rat King (edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-15-2021, 11:07 AM
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