Draft 5: Always Space

Draft 5: Always Space

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05-14-2021, 12:43 AM

I prefer to original beginning. Why "We could", not "We will"?

I'm not crazy about the interruption of the song lyrics.

But from that point on, it's a beautiful poem.

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Draft 5: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 03-11-2021, 03:19 AM

RE: Always Space - by TranquillityBase - 03-11-2021, 05:05 AM

RE: Always Space - by Majestic Sun - 04-28-2021, 11:16 AM

RE: Always Space - by Thunderembargo - 04-29-2021, 04:17 AM

RE: 2nd Draft: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 05-13-2021, 01:37 AM

RE: 2nd Draft: Always Space - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2021, 12:43 AM

RE: 2nd Draft: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 05-14-2021, 01:15 AM

RE: 2nd Draft: Always Space - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2021, 01:37 AM

RE: Draft 2: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 05-19-2021, 02:23 AM

RE: Draft 2: Always Space - by tmanzano - 05-19-2021, 10:01 AM

RE: Draft 2: Always Space - by ZonaIncerta - 06-08-2021, 03:16 AM

RE: Draft 3: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 06-22-2021, 01:11 AM

RE: Draft 3: Always Space - by TranquillityBase - 06-22-2021, 06:36 AM

RE: Draft 3: Always Space - by noraaajane - 06-25-2021, 09:41 AM

RE: Draft 3: Always Space - by Erthona - 06-28-2021, 01:07 PM

RE: Draft 4: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 07-03-2021, 06:48 AM

RE: Draft 4: Always Space - by TranquillityBase - 07-03-2021, 08:35 AM

RE: Draft 4: Always Space - by Erthona - 07-07-2021, 06:38 AM

RE: Draft 4: Always Space - by Knot - 07-08-2021, 12:25 AM

RE: Draft 5: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 07-12-2021, 12:34 AM

RE: Draft 5: Always Space - by Knot - 07-12-2021, 01:55 AM

RE: Draft 5: Always Space - by alonso ramoran - 07-12-2021, 05:37 AM

RE: Draft 5: Always Space - by Knot - 07-13-2021, 12:02 AM

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