Ozymandias
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knot,

That's a nice rewrite, very punchy.

I guess I could change it to Neo-Ozymandias, but that seemed a bit wordy. Or maybe
Ozzy-man-dias. It's basically about trying to be immortal in the present day. A way to hide from fear. Oh well!

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-09-2021, 11:15 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by TranquillityBase - 05-09-2021, 11:43 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Majestic Sun - 05-10-2021, 10:33 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-10-2021, 02:04 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Knot - 05-10-2021, 09:09 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-13-2021, 06:37 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Knot - 05-13-2021, 07:30 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 05-19-2021, 12:21 PM
RE: Ozymandias - by dukealien - 05-20-2021, 07:59 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by RiverNotch - 05-21-2021, 02:28 AM
RE: Ozymandias - by Erthona - 06-15-2021, 03:11 PM



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