05-10-2021, 10:33 AM
(05-09-2021, 11:15 AM)Erthona Wrote: OzymandiasShort and sweet, I do think the title should be changed because I think this poem is based on a famous one by Shelly but still. And I agree with the latter it the last line seems to be too long.
I laid down in my flower bed
but found nowhere to place my head.
Of course it mattered not,
for I was dead and soon would rot.
©2021 erthona

