A Mystic Journey

[Majestic Sun]

Here is a rewrite, with both of you guys' notes in mind that responded.

A Mystic Journey

By Matthew Smith



My inner man is stirred to a vision
off the coast 
of my mind's eye 
I awake to a mystery,
walking along a majestic sea of crystal glass 
a dolphin leaping out of the blue 
a white gloved hand
beckons me,
turns me into a wide speckled eyed wanderer
a grand spiral staircase coming forth
Heaven-sent
the hand points and turns as if a clock 
“Ascend,” it says.
I yield and obey
the gloved hand slowly nudging me,
guiding me ever gently upwards

where am I going?
The steps bleed together,
My legs growing tired.
I am nearly faint of heart now,
gasping
one final step and I'm out of breath 
 
- A doorway 
I collapse against the wood
breathing
instinctively, my hand wanders the keyhole



·      A peek inside reveals an entire universe
 
I look to the hand, but there is no response.
my heart is beating in my chest wildly
observing, I wonder? 
I place my wet, sweaty fingers into the hole,
fingering for a moment,
searching.
·      

yes. there it is. a latch.
I grab ahold and pull the trigger,
my moist, hot hands dripping
and with a click, a release,
the door is ajar now, revealing glowing light
Entering, the hand becomes a dove 
She flys away, leaving a swirl of colors behind her
She says, "I am spirit and I am breath of your flesh. I give you permission to dwell in both universes.” 
 
I fall down as I see colors I've never seen before 
A masterpiece of pink opening up like a woman's vagina
Or breasts
A collapsing feeling fills my chest
I ache with love
my tears flowing
Swirls of purple effervescence all about
Spiraling, dancing around me
I have become Snow White, 
graced by the song of blue birds 
perching on my shoulder
a brown-grey rabbit at my feet 
I welcome each strange creature,
seeing bursts of yellowish light
firecrackers filling me with a red glow
It dawns on me: this is the color of love
- Love unknown is now known.  
Am I dead? 

• Nevermind. I am at peace now. It is complete. 
  

Why did you make the font so big? I think size 12, times new roman would be suitable.