05-08-2021, 10:49 PM
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Just out of curiosity, who do you see as the audience for this?
Best, Knot
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Having Cathar in the title does muddy the waters (when only Philip was used in section 5).
You could try, as an alternative line 6
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He was Philip, a Bard of conspiracies,
or even
...
Cathar, who was Philip, a Bard ...
or just not being quite so elliptical

Just out of curiosity, who do you see as the audience for this?
Best, Knot
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