05-08-2021, 04:52 PM
Sestinas are tough to critique because of the sheer size of them so I will try to critique it: I do think that you have a good sense of rhythm, a little robotic but it will do, I didn't understand this line:
he smells
mixed with experience
What did you mean by that? Experience of what?
I also think that you can perhaps write in a different poetic form cause this seems to really hard to critique, there are too many words to choose from.
he smells
mixed with experience
What did you mean by that? Experience of what?
I also think that you can perhaps write in a different poetic form cause this seems to really hard to critique, there are too many words to choose from.