The Hobbyhorse

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Majestic, Dukealien has done such a thorough job of critique, I will wait until I see a revision, but I wanted to add my second to Duke's first comment, that this is an interesting poem.  I kind of like the meandering aspect, but that is going to annoy other readers.  But every stanza has some good lines as D pointed out.

Anyway, looking forward to the revision.