The Hobbyhorse
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P.S: would it be better if it were blank verse?

I'm not sure it would.  You can try it, but I don't think you'll be able to easily reduce it to a consistent line length.   A more easily read rhythm, maybe, without trying to make it completely consistent or all line lengths the same.
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Messages In This Thread
The Hobbyhorse - by Majestic Sun - 05-02-2021, 10:29 AM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by dukealien - 05-02-2021, 11:50 AM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by Majestic Sun - 05-02-2021, 12:14 PM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by dukealien - 05-02-2021, 10:20 PM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by Majestic Sun - 05-03-2021, 02:32 AM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by TranquillityBase - 05-04-2021, 06:31 AM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by Majestic Sun - 05-04-2021, 06:53 AM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by TranquillityBase - 05-04-2021, 08:53 AM
RE: The Hobbyhorse - by Majestic Sun - 05-04-2021, 09:29 AM



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