A Long Night at the Dreary House (revised)

[Majestic Sun]

I like what you've done here with the additional stanzas on smooth jazz.  Needs more work, but I need you to give me a couple of days before I come back with anything more detailed.  I'm kind of poetry-weary with NaPoM and don't want to burn out before April 30 

No problem, I am doing NaPoWriMo too, good luck writing 30 poems in 30 days. I did it last year and the year before that and succeeded.