A Long Night at the Dreary House (revised)

[Majestic Sun]

This new dawn I hope to soak in the love.
Of what it means to live in the moment of day.
I smoke my long cigarette and smelling my scotch.         savor?
As the dreadful night that comes unveiling,
 
The argument of the shadow and light.
Stabs my eyes from the orange streetlights.
There is a sensation in my heart, I hear Jazz,
I hear the sound of saxophones and percussion.
 
Then I continue to sit on my chair and wait,
For the dawn to give me a lick of morning light.                  
I cannot stand the streetlight glinting through the window.
I cannot stand the night which darkens the sky.
 
But Jazz will drive me to become a better man.           
I meditate on the philosophy on the genre.
Then I take time to remember what it means,                                   
To live and breathe the genre in my lungs.

This is a good ending but would be better if you describe your mediations on jazz; how does it give you hope; what kind of jazz; what does it mean to you?

Tranquil how is this? I think it reads better now, I answered the question you asked on the meditations on Jazz.


This new dawn I hope to soak in the love,
Of what it means to live in the moment of day.
I smoke my long cigarette and savour my scotch.
As the dreadful night that comes unveiling.
 
The argument of the shadow and light
Stabs my eyes from the orange streetlights.
There is a sensation in my heart, I hear Jazz.
I hear the sound of saxophones and percussion.
 
I continue to sit on my chair and wait,
For the dawn to give me a dance of morning light.
I cannot stand the streetlight glinting through windows.
I cannot stand the night which darkens the sky.
 
But Jazz will drive me to become a better man.
Because of the clarity of its subtle tranquility.
Also, the hope of this new dawn to relax me.
And the Jazz I am speaking about is Smooth Jazz.
 
Also, jazz to me means waking up in the morning.
With my head held high and relaxation in the evening.
That is what Jazz does for me, the sound of blues ascends.
From the docking station, causing me to sleep a little.
 
But as long as I have the genre in my mind.
I think there is no stopping me at the slightest.
Those who think otherwise need psychiatric help.
This is the genre that defines who I am.