morning walk at kumrat valley
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I very much enjoyed reading this poem.  Punctuation (a little), capitalization, all that boring stuff, would make it more accessible to the reader, but I have no suggestions for changes to words as it seems a very good piece of work.  If anything, it's too brief.

p.s. what happened to "a short history of cinema". that was yours, right? I'd like to see it again.


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morning walk at kumrat valley - by ungeziefers - 04-17-2021, 04:41 AM
RE: morning walk at kumrat valley - by TranquillityBase - 04-20-2021, 09:56 AM



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