04-20-2021, 09:56 AM
I very much enjoyed reading this poem. Punctuation (a little), capitalization, all that boring stuff, would make it more accessible to the reader, but I have no suggestions for changes to words as it seems a very good piece of work. If anything, it's too brief.
p.s. what happened to "a short history of cinema". that was yours, right? I'd like to see it again.
p.s. what happened to "a short history of cinema". that was yours, right? I'd like to see it again.

