04-19-2021, 08:17 AM
(04-19-2021, 08:08 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote: Every single line is distracting, capital letter to a period. Start stop start stop, some aren't even complete sentences. I think epic poems have to being incredibly long with lots of convoluted adventures and ancient Gods mischief in human lives... Throw in some enjambment if you need all the periods,Ok, I will find a way to make it less distracting, I was afraid if I get comma's or some kind of enjambment it would ruin the poem, error wise. So, I suppose editing will come into play. Do epic poems have to have some kind of fantasy aspect at all? What about modern epic poems? I think times have changed. By the way, I do have some epic poems I wrote in the past, perhaps I could show you them.