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Concerto Silence
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04-19-2021, 08:08 AM
Every single line is distracting, capital letter to a period. Start stop start stop, some aren't even complete sentences. I think epic poems have to being incredibly long with lots of convoluted adventures and ancient Gods mischief in human lives... Throw in some enjambment if you need all the periods,
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Concerto Silence - by Majestic Sun - 04-18-2021, 07:28 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by CRNDLSM - 04-18-2021, 09:41 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by Majestic Sun - 04-18-2021, 10:37 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by CRNDLSM - 04-18-2021, 10:53 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by Majestic Sun - 04-18-2021, 10:57 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by TranquillityBase - 04-18-2021, 10:12 PM
RE: Concerto Silence - by Majestic Sun - 04-19-2021, 06:55 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by CRNDLSM - 04-19-2021, 08:08 AM
RE: Concerto Silence - by Majestic Sun - 04-19-2021, 08:17 AM
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