Celestial Bodies Dancing in Toronto

[Majestic Sun]

Would it be ok if I post a revision in the future?

You are always allowed to revise your poem. There is no timetable for editing a poem.  You can post a revision immediately or in a year or two years, it’s really up to you.   Most experienced writers tend to say don’t do big edits too soon, but let the poem and the comments received marinate a bit.  But in the end it’s completely up to you.  All we ask is that you keep every version of this poem in this same thread.  Simply edit the original post and place the revised version at the top so that new readers will critique the newest version. There is code for hiding away older versions of the poem in “spoiler” boxes if you want to keep the thread tidy. (You will find the code in “how to use the pigpen”—>”new formatting code for hiding original”).

If you have further questions, my inbox is always open.  

—Quix

Thanks Quix!