04-11-2021, 02:00 AM
Hi savannah,
I like the flowing lines too. And I also like a lot of the imagery, e.g. 'walls of tar, concrete / and hair', 'silver reed', 'limpid pool', 'soaked mud' and 'awakened leaf' (excellent). For me, these are the strongest parts of the poem.
I'm a bit unsure about 'a Christmas / angel' too; sorry if I'm missing something here.
All best,
Leaf
I like the flowing lines too. And I also like a lot of the imagery, e.g. 'walls of tar, concrete / and hair', 'silver reed', 'limpid pool', 'soaked mud' and 'awakened leaf' (excellent). For me, these are the strongest parts of the poem.
I'm a bit unsure about 'a Christmas / angel' too; sorry if I'm missing something here.
All best,
Leaf