03-31-2021, 08:30 AM
Hey Tim-
Thanks for not getting pissed off by my edit. I couldn't help myself.
As I went about it, the power of your poem nearly overwhelmed me, probably due to my recent cancer issue, learning that one of my brothers has cancer, and the real disaster of finding a few days ago that one of my nephews (11 years old) is battling brain cancer.
Editing such a beautiful piece proved to be cathartic for me.
Thanks,
Mark
ps. The thought of that reliquary is beautiful. I can imagine it perfectly.
Thanks for not getting pissed off by my edit. I couldn't help myself.
As I went about it, the power of your poem nearly overwhelmed me, probably due to my recent cancer issue, learning that one of my brothers has cancer, and the real disaster of finding a few days ago that one of my nephews (11 years old) is battling brain cancer.
Editing such a beautiful piece proved to be cathartic for me.
Thanks,
Mark
(03-31-2021, 08:17 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: Thank you both for your readings and critiques. I really appreciate it when anyone comments, but Knot has been in there from the first as a commentator (and I wish he would give us another poem soon!).
I really did make a box, alas, copper nails seem a thing of the past.
Quote:I really did make a box, alas, copper nails seem a thing of the past.
ps. The thought of that reliquary is beautiful. I can imagine it perfectly.