03-26-2021, 04:42 AM
Hey Tim-
Since this is MISC, I'll only make general comments.
Thanks for introducing me to Mr. Bellocq and posting the links to some of his damaged work. Thank you, also, for making me do a search on this fellow, as I'm very interested in people/topics that I would otherwise be completely unaware of.
Regarding the poem, the lines that end each stanza are just oustanding! Good work !
...these dark spaces
that keep my goddess
buried alive in this photographic Hell.
...nakedness that made
their faces a sin.
Since this is MISC, I'll only make general comments.
Thanks for introducing me to Mr. Bellocq and posting the links to some of his damaged work. Thank you, also, for making me do a search on this fellow, as I'm very interested in people/topics that I would otherwise be completely unaware of.
Regarding the poem, the lines that end each stanza are just oustanding! Good work !
...these dark spaces
that keep my goddess
buried alive in this photographic Hell.
...nakedness that made
their faces a sin.