Draft 3: Unhomed
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Hi alex,
better for the revision.


just a thought ...


Because the house is empty,
the buzzing of a fly is all
that can be heard, tapping
on the pane an image fades
and brightens, as if real enough
to live in, though it will be
the sill where the fly rests
with the others. Today
I’ll leave the window open,
tear the screen and hope


Best, Knot


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Messages In This Thread
Draft 3: Unhomed - by alonso ramoran - 02-16-2021, 04:40 AM
RE: Dispossessed - by TranquillityBase - 02-16-2021, 11:47 PM
RE: Dispossessed - by John - 02-17-2021, 11:30 PM
RE: Dispossessed - by alonso ramoran - 02-18-2021, 01:44 AM
RE: Dispossessed - by Miley - 02-18-2021, 10:36 AM
RE: Dispossessed - by arbil_poieo - 02-18-2021, 11:05 PM
RE: Dispossessed - by hcadship - 03-09-2021, 08:39 AM
RE: Dispossessed - by Frenchie - 03-14-2021, 12:27 AM
RE: Draft 2: Unhomed - by alonso ramoran - 03-22-2021, 07:12 AM
RE: Draft 2: Unhomed - by Knot - 03-22-2021, 11:36 PM
RE: Draft 2: Unhomed - by alonso ramoran - 03-23-2021, 02:01 AM
RE: Draft 2: Unhomed - by Knot - 03-23-2021, 02:58 AM
RE: Draft 3: Unhomed - by alonso ramoran - 04-02-2021, 12:12 AM
RE: Draft 3: Unhomed - by Mark A Becker - 04-02-2021, 12:55 AM



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