Draft 3: Unhomed

[alonso ramoran]

Hey guys,

Thank you so much for all the feedback so far. I've tried to address as many of them as I could in this edit, so I hope this one is better in some way.

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Frenchie,

I double-checked my window and now I'm sure there's no other way to get rid of the screen without tearing it lol

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Miley,
Really liked that your critique included a more political interpretation of the poem, since that is what I was trying to achieve with the title. Thank you for the feedback


Kind regards,
Alex