Illuminating - edit
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(03-17-2021, 11:45 PM)dukealien Wrote:  edit1;
Hi Duke,
don’t think ‘tints’ adds to the poem (the title already suggests this).

Just a thought Smile

Man in blaze yellow
jacket turns white lab coat
walking dog daffodil.


Best, Knot


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Illuminating - edit - by dukealien - 03-16-2021, 11:39 PM
RE: Illuminating - by Knot - 03-17-2021, 12:18 AM
RE: Illuminating - by TranquillityBase - 03-17-2021, 01:42 AM
RE: Illuminating - by Mark A Becker - 03-17-2021, 10:42 PM
RE: Illuminating - by dukealien - 03-17-2021, 11:45 PM
RE: Illuminating - by Knot - 03-18-2021, 12:18 AM



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