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Knot

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03-18-2021, 12:18 AM

(03-17-2021, 11:45 PM)dukealien Wrote: edit1;

Hi Duke,
don’t think ‘tints’ adds to the poem (the title already suggests this).

Just a thought Smile

Man in blaze yellow
jacket turns white lab coat
walking dog daffodil.

Best, Knot

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Illuminating - edit - by dukealien - 03-16-2021, 11:39 PM

RE: Illuminating - by Knot - 03-17-2021, 12:18 AM

RE: Illuminating - by dukealien - 03-17-2021, 11:45 PM

RE: Illuminating - by Knot - 03-18-2021, 12:18 AM

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