Illuminating - edit

[Mark A Becker]

Hey alien-

I had a little trouble immediately visualizing "dog daffodil", but that's my problem. 

Since I have seen the blaze yellow daffodils that signal spring coming, this poem has an odd way of making sense.

It took some thought from my slow brain to understand that the scene turns the lab into a "dog daffodil", and perhaps "into a dog daffodil" might offer immediate clarity of the image. 

That said, I do appreciate a poem (words) that describes a scene like a snapshot photo.

Thanks,
Mark