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Knot

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03-17-2021, 12:18 AM

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Hi Duke,
enjoyed this one.
Wondered about lower-casing ‘Man’
and replacing ‘he’s’ with ‘coat’?
(But only wondered Smile

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Best, Knot

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Illuminating - edit - by dukealien - 03-16-2021, 11:39 PM

RE: Illuminating - by Knot - 03-17-2021, 12:18 AM

RE: Illuminating - by dukealien - 03-17-2021, 11:45 PM

RE: Illuminating - by Knot - 03-18-2021, 12:18 AM

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