Pill x Pill
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This is great.  It explains (if explanation were needed for any human being) how escaping addiction is so difficult:  it's one damn day after another, one act from sleep to sleep with all the scenes inbetween, and the whole bottomless rabbit hole is always right there behind you with gravity as an excuse.

Notable:  addressing self in both first and second/third person.  A little schizoid?  Understandable.

That one line, "Then you boy society had," is so poignant:  the speaker can still backslide, is not completely there. (And never will be.)

(I take the pill of the first part to be the speaker's meds, the second his drug of choice.  Neat and insightful.)
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Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 02-24-2021, 07:25 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by dukealien - 02-24-2021, 11:57 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 02-25-2021, 09:46 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Knot - 02-25-2021, 10:12 PM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 02-26-2021, 01:36 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Knot - 02-26-2021, 02:52 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 02-27-2021, 05:25 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 02-27-2021, 02:01 PM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-03-2021, 10:51 PM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 03-04-2021, 03:26 PM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-05-2021, 02:03 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 03-05-2021, 03:19 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-05-2021, 10:27 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-06-2021, 12:03 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 03-09-2021, 05:09 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-09-2021, 06:20 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 03-14-2021, 01:00 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-18-2021, 01:41 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by rowens - 03-18-2021, 03:49 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Thunderembargo - 03-29-2021, 03:43 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 06-01-2024, 02:34 AM
RE: Pill x Pill - by Bunx - 08-26-2024, 12:59 PM



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