02-22-2021, 04:07 AM
Hey dukealien,
First impression is wow! This was really impressive with all the nice strong images. My favorite is the 4th line with “moonstone fleece.” I also really like the alliteration. Also all the different rocks and jewels was a nice touch. I’m trying to find something that I don’t like about it but there’s really nothing because it is an easy read with no hiccups, the words just flowed and worked really well together with a nice twist at the end. I’m sorry I couldn’t be more helpful. I’ll definitely come back to it.
First impression is wow! This was really impressive with all the nice strong images. My favorite is the 4th line with “moonstone fleece.” I also really like the alliteration. Also all the different rocks and jewels was a nice touch. I’m trying to find something that I don’t like about it but there’s really nothing because it is an easy read with no hiccups, the words just flowed and worked really well together with a nice twist at the end. I’m sorry I couldn’t be more helpful. I’ll definitely come back to it.