Set Sail to the Centaurs

[arbil_poieo]

Hello Thunderembargo, the capitalization also threw me off. I love the imagery, it’s so colorful and creative. I think my favorite lines is the first and third...like “hot Jupiter” and “ivory mast from the cartoon deck.” This was a fun read because of all the details.

I like the line breaks between...hours” and “...relative” and then “to all kinds” really emphasized the Watchman’s predicament.

I enjoyed reading this from start to finish. It’s really worth reading over and over.