02-21-2021, 02:47 AM
Other than the capitalization, I really "dig" this poem. I've just been reading Lewis Carroll and Edmund Edward Lear, and I'm not calling your poem "nonsense", which it is not, but it's got a playfulness that you find in the best of nonsense verse. Yet the Watchman's predicament is no joke.
Favorite image: "his heretofore clock"
Favorite image: "his heretofore clock"

