unmelted - edit
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unmelted


ice vitrifies my thoughts this jewel day
  oaks diamond-clad
  streets dimly pearled
  onyx bushes flocked with moonstone wool

bright bitter beauty’s gemstone silences
deep-frozen as your unresponsive heart



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Unmelted


Ice occupies my thoughts this jewel day
  trees diamond-clad
  streets dimly pearled
  jet bushes flocked with moonstone fleece

bright bitter beauty’s gemstone silences
deep-frozen as your unresponsive heart.

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unmelted - edit - by dukealien - 02-20-2021, 11:23 AM
RE: Unmelted - by arbil_poieo - 02-22-2021, 04:07 AM
RE: Unmelted - by Torkelburger - 02-23-2021, 12:11 AM
RE: Unmelted - by Mark A Becker - 02-24-2021, 03:05 AM
RE: unmelted - edit - by dukealien - 02-24-2021, 11:40 AM
RE: unmelted - edit - by Majestic Sun - 04-15-2021, 05:10 AM
RE: unmelted - edit - by dukealien - 04-15-2021, 10:18 PM
RE: unmelted - edit - by SapientScribe - 04-25-2021, 06:03 AM



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