Spit
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I find myself re-reading this for the rich content, but I'm really distracted by the paragraph like structure.

And it seems like you should have s single word line after stanza 3, just the symmetry obsessive in me.
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Spit - by arbil_poieo - 02-19-2021, 04:21 PM
RE: Spit - by TranquillityBase - 02-19-2021, 11:42 PM
RE: Spit - by arbil_poieo - 02-21-2021, 11:11 AM
RE: Spit - by TranquillityBase - 02-23-2021, 12:12 AM
RE: Spit - by Mark A Becker - 02-24-2021, 02:25 AM
RE: Spit - by tmanzano - 04-23-2021, 08:41 AM



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