The Family Tree
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Hey Tim-

Thanks for the comments.

The "new tire swing" helped me keep the line at 6 syallables, to match the 6 syllable count of each line: a syllabic quirk of mine that helps me stay concise. Plus, "new" seemed important to the narrative.

All that said, what I guess I was gettin at is that change can take generations.

Mark
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The Family Tree - by Mark A Becker - 02-14-2021, 09:01 AM
RE: The Family Tree - by TranquillityBase - 02-14-2021, 09:31 AM
RE: The Family Tree - by Mark A Becker - 02-15-2021, 05:47 AM
RE: The Family Tree - by TranquillityBase - 02-16-2021, 12:57 AM



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