One Night Stand on Der Zauberberg
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TB,

As this in basic, I'll be brief and refrain from an expository, although this seems to demand it.

Capping every line is a bit off putting and makes for more difficult reading, unless you are aping Pound's style; regardless it makes the reading difficult

Did you not read your Castaneda well? One never swallows the juice.

“A man of no fortune, and with a name to come"

best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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RE: One Night Stand on Der Zauberberg - by Knot - 02-01-2021, 03:29 AM
RE: One Night Stand on Der Zauberberg - by Knot - 02-01-2021, 11:32 PM
RE: One Night Stand on Der Zauberberg - by Knot - 02-05-2021, 03:56 AM
RE: One Night Stand on Der Zauberberg - by Knot - 02-07-2021, 01:17 AM
RE: One Night Stand on Der Zauberberg - by Erthona - 02-09-2021, 06:32 AM



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