02-03-2021, 12:14 AM
Two thoughts, busker:
Why is the poem a continuation of the title? Haven't seen it before in prose or poetry. Otherwise standing alone beginning with Is makes it grammatically nonsensical.
Secondly, one word for 'thin layer' could be smear or film?
Cheers.
Why is the poem a continuation of the title? Haven't seen it before in prose or poetry. Otherwise standing alone beginning with Is makes it grammatically nonsensical.
Secondly, one word for 'thin layer' could be smear or film?
Cheers.
A poet who can't make the language sing doesn't start. Hence the shortage of real poems amongst the global planktonic field of duds. - Clive James.