Who Am I?

Who Am I?

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#12

02-01-2021, 09:05 PM

This poem starts strong and ends strongly with a very memorable last line.

But I think something gets lost starting with "morph into a sponge...." until you get back to your main metaphor, words, with "Give me your metaphors"

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Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-02-2020, 02:51 PM

RE: Who Am I? - by rowens - 04-09-2020, 05:13 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-09-2020, 08:19 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by rowens - 04-09-2020, 09:15 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-09-2020, 09:32 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by rowens - 04-10-2020, 04:42 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by easywayout - 04-10-2020, 07:49 PM

RE: Who Am I? - by savannah - 04-11-2020, 02:35 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by Marissacharles__ - 04-11-2020, 03:16 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by Lilly123 - 09-08-2020, 09:26 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by RhythmGuy - 10-15-2020, 08:29 AM

RE: Who Am I? - by TranquillityBase - 02-01-2021, 09:05 PM

RE: Who Am I? - by Erock - 01-09-2022, 05:31 PM

RE: Who Am I? - by Quixilated - 01-14-2022, 08:12 PM

RE: Who Am I? - by DragonBlue - 01-13-2022, 05:32 PM

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