Better Normal
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As this is in missile-anus I will not critique, but you might to consider work-shopping it. I think the poem is worth the effort.


best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Better Normal - by Bunx - 01-15-2021, 03:01 AM
RE: Better Normal - by Erthona - 01-16-2021, 07:05 PM
RE: Better Normal - by newsclippings - 01-19-2021, 05:47 AM
RE: Better Normal - by Bunx - 08-17-2024, 12:35 AM



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